BEC写作法宝丨虎“头”凤“尾” 至胜图表题
还记得之前我们讲过的柱状图、线形图和饼状图的描述技巧吗?不过那只是针对图表本身的描述,一篇文章缺头少尾怎么行?!下面,我们就一起来看看在首尾段如何针对图表内容做总结性介绍,这样完整的一篇图表作文就新鲜出炉啦!
从小到大我们就受到这样的熏陶,作文要开门见山,开头要开得漂亮,那么如何才能漂亮地切入主题呢?这里,沪江英语教研君悄悄告诉你哦:尽量用自己的语言(paraphrase)将图表作文中给出的题目要求和图表主题归纳出来。如果你将题目要求或图表主题逐字照搬,会影响到你的分数。那么,为了避免原文照抄,下面教研君传授大家几招:
改变措辞
题目要求:The bar chart compares the numbers of male and female executives in different age ranges in a large IT company.
主题句可改写为:The bar chart compares the numbers of male and female managers ranging from different ages in a large IT company.
改变结构
题目要求:The bar chart compares the numbers of male and female executives in different age ranges in a large IT company.
主题句可改写为:The bar chart, in a large IT company, compares the numbers of male and female executives in different age ranges.
改变时间状语的表达方法
题目要求:The graph shows the sales of their products in the three major international markets between 2004 and 2007.
主题句可改写为:The graph shows the sales of their products in the three major international markets during a three-year period.